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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I'm sorry I can't write a lot, I mush go soon (I love the piece by the way, and it's remarkably unique.)

I find that while this is a very well envisioned face (feminine enough to be graceful while rough enough to add tension) it's immediately lost in the similarly styled leftern background, especially with that attention diverting red flashing. Had the white space been even slightly tant with gray or red (which would show-up pink) or covered with a fine texture, the face would stand predominant without breaking the picture's unity.

Quite a few "fine" artists have realized the potential of the GIF image type, and for that you're certainly credited. I just feel this wasn't the best fit for it.

(Since I have a few seconds yet...) I adore the way you drew the hair, lips, and zipper. They're all very stylish and interesting and enhance the mood greatly.